tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post4916278268264974117..comments2023-07-24T05:55:02.854-07:00Comments on Peter Wilkin's BLOG: Peter Wilkinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12955283590189985306noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-28237747187740795732012-03-21T03:47:36.851-07:002012-03-21T03:47:36.851-07:00What a wonderful compliment ~ thank you so much Ed...What a wonderful compliment ~ thank you so much Edjo, that is so lovely of you :)Peter Wilkinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12955283590189985306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-8212775511771021882012-03-21T02:43:05.046-07:002012-03-21T02:43:05.046-07:00Just found your Spring Poem - it is beautiful.Your...Just found your Spring Poem - it is beautiful.Your poetical words and verse are like the music of The rites of Spring (Stravinsky)Edjohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13304831246727558823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-19962894459602650112012-03-21T02:25:37.032-07:002012-03-21T02:25:37.032-07:00Thank you ever so much for your wonderful comments...Thank you ever so much for your wonderful comments Louise ~ I really do value them & so pleased you like 'Ostara' :)Peter Wilkinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12955283590189985306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-38699082978822173952012-03-21T00:43:12.855-07:002012-03-21T00:43:12.855-07:00Gorgeously descriptive with wonderful imagery. Tho...Gorgeously descriptive with wonderful imagery. Those last 4 lines:<br /> <br />"This is the moment when we feel<br />the earth dancing inside our selves;<br />when the untouchable stars flicker<br />and whisper about infinitude." <br /><br />..are divine. Another beautiful poem, Peter :) xLouisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-58708847932689845272012-03-20T12:59:47.809-07:002012-03-20T12:59:47.809-07:00And thank you, Jo-Anne, for such lovely, thoughtfu...And thank you, Jo-Anne, for such lovely, thoughtful comments. I'm so pleased you like it & felt able to share your feelings about it. Very much appreciated :)Peter Wilkinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12955283590189985306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-60343826751684158382012-03-20T12:40:38.137-07:002012-03-20T12:40:38.137-07:00How wonderful to start the first day of Spring wit...How wonderful to start the first day of Spring with such a rich, sensual poem. "This is the moment when we feel<br />the earth dancing inside our selves..." It is indeed, and having read your evocative words, I am more aware of it than ever. Thank you for writing and sharing it with us Peter.<br />JoJo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-11781104886658879262012-03-20T03:04:17.075-07:002012-03-20T03:04:17.075-07:00Hi Martin ~ pleased you like my poem & thank y...Hi Martin ~ pleased you like my poem & thank you for such lovely comments.Peter Wilkinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12955283590189985306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-41388778022440183992012-03-19T17:19:09.703-07:002012-03-19T17:19:09.703-07:00A wonderful view on personified spring. In your po...A wonderful view on personified spring. In your poem its magic grows and shines. Love especially the last lines!Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17564210453026152076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-4886348448605710482012-03-19T15:52:50.797-07:002012-03-19T15:52:50.797-07:00What a beautiful thing to write ~ thank you sincer...What a beautiful thing to write ~ thank you sincerely, Marousia. I'm so pleased that you managed to leave a comment ~ bless you for persevering :)Peter Wilkinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12955283590189985306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-49223597798225558782012-03-19T15:48:05.624-07:002012-03-19T15:48:05.624-07:00Thank you Abi for such lovely, detailed comments. ...Thank you Abi for such lovely, detailed comments. I really appreciate them all :)Peter Wilkinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12955283590189985306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-67779753609311820302012-03-19T15:41:57.801-07:002012-03-19T15:41:57.801-07:00Peter, there is not a single word out of place in ...Peter, there is not a single word out of place in this glorious ode. I shall carry the spirit of your words for a long time. The earth shall dance inside me:<br /><br />This is the moment when we feel<br />the earth dancing inside our selves;<br />when the untouchable stars flicker<br />and whisper about infinitude.marousiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12925164210601407878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-51736539193802529762012-03-19T15:27:30.547-07:002012-03-19T15:27:30.547-07:00This poem is filled with so many wonderful descrip...This poem is filled with so many wonderful descriptions.<br /><br />I love Fiddleheads, Petrichor and bone-white moon... but for me, these lines linger beautifully:<br /><br />'Eyelids begin to flutter, brushed lightly<br />by saffron tinted shadows.'<br /><br />And then the last four lines are just divine, leaving you feeling wrapped up in the warmth of spring.<br /><br />A really lovely poem :)The Linnethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17709373300621371888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-7741543849046882022012-03-19T13:47:31.684-07:002012-03-19T13:47:31.684-07:00Thank you Chris ~ really pleased that you enjoyed ...Thank you Chris ~ really pleased that you enjoyed my poem.Peter Wilkinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12955283590189985306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-75530079536441024892012-03-19T13:46:34.495-07:002012-03-19T13:46:34.495-07:00That is so kind of you Heidi ~ thank you ever so m...That is so kind of you Heidi ~ thank you ever so much for your lovely comments.Peter Wilkinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12955283590189985306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-34799139560960065092012-03-19T12:31:17.900-07:002012-03-19T12:31:17.900-07:00Lovely ode to spring, birth and rebirth. Beautiful...Lovely ode to spring, birth and rebirth. Beautiful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-82136430056307923762012-03-19T11:17:32.731-07:002012-03-19T11:17:32.731-07:00"This is the moment when we feel
the earth da..."This is the moment when we feel<br />the earth dancing inside our selves;<br />when the untouchable stars flicker<br />and whisper about infinitude"<br /><br />Could there be anything more lovely to herald the return of spring? <br /><br />You are a treasure.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-59940921876206640452012-03-19T07:58:37.850-07:002012-03-19T07:58:37.850-07:00Thank you sincerely for your lovely comments, Jacq...Thank you sincerely for your lovely comments, Jacquie ~ I'm so pleased that you like it so much.Peter Wilkinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12955283590189985306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8957989888391752290.post-62123258592691887612012-03-19T07:50:50.231-07:002012-03-19T07:50:50.231-07:00This is so rich, so sensual...like Spring itself. ...This is so rich, so sensual...like Spring itself. I'm there feeling the slickness, the oil, smelling the petrichor, all the aromas. Sentient, exploding with color and rebirth. Really a gorgeous poem, P. I love it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com